Reviews for Heart
BadGirlz4Life chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
i liked this even though its not your traditional haiku
teh tarik chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
I could feel all the sadness and feeling of heart break expressed in this piece. Great work.
kelseytheballerina chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
If this has been inspired by experience...I'm sorry you've lost someone whether it's breaking up with your b/f, you're best friend moving away, or a death, I'm sorry someone was lost. If not, a great haiku with a great metaphor.