Reviews for The Killer in Her
genny marie chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
pretty good, the only issue i have with it is that it doesn't really flow from stanza to stanza, other than that it's very good, very descriptive, pretty powerful...
this is me sometimes, lol...
XOXO
Meg
Impy-Miss-Manson chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
I LOVE THIS!

It is so interesting!

Though I find most poems interesting this would be one of the best I have read!

It really reminds me of ,well ,me! _''...
Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
OIY!

You did it again!

Another poem I can relate to in some way!

The words and flow to this is great and effective. It really gives a deep view into situations like this. Very well done!
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 9/3/2003
Yeah, this is me... for some reason I have vague memories of something like this. Oh well, I loved it, good work

xTokx
crimsonfrost chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
m mm mm. Anyone who could right this has got to be interesting. This is extraordinary. There are times when this peice captures exactly how I feel. Despare and the wish to inflict bodily harm on those around us. I'm not insane trust me. But we all have our bad days.

Nice writing.
KayBird chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Ah...That's creepy...But then again, I love creepy. Oh, I read your bio, and ya know what? I don't care if you are in love with a girl. It makes you all the more beautiful and unique. I do hope you have a wonderful life. Continue writing. Very deadly and lethal.