Reviews for Blue Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really LOVE this story. I really LOVE her (Gwenna) character. She is very independent and brave. Gosh how I love her. She is my heroeine. Please keep POSTING MORE THIS STORY. I've been waiting for you to update this story for a very long time. Excellent story! Good writing style. I really mean it! UPDATE MORE SOON! |
![]() ![]() What a nice story! I really love it. PLEASE UPDATE MORE SOON! I can't wait!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, nice so far but you should make a new paragraph each time a new person starts talking, it can get confusing. Also if this story is in the 1300's you should make it sound more like it. Right now it's just like a normal family in a midevil setting, (expet the knights and such but you get what I'm saying) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes this does have very good potential for a story...you should continue it...your description is good i didnt notice any mistakes so yes definately update ill look foward to reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice n cool story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() wow! i cant wait till u update this is has a lot of potential |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicole, so far this is really good! Keep updating and don't ever think its bad and don't go on breaks and just update *giggle* sorry i'm confusing myself. Well anyways so far u have a good voice, good characters, good sense of humour most likely good at everything. I'd like to read more so yah Good job gurl! |