This is beautifuL! I think your words in this are so powerful! Such a strong love poem, so great. *Claps hands* APPLAUSE EVERYONE! this is a remarcable piece. I havent read that many love poems, but this is outstanding. The heatbreak in the guys eyes is so sad...Well done.

:'( so sad... good.

*pats on back*

Good...I don't know, I don't really like love poems, but I suppose on the actual POETICAL aspect, it's good. Ok, I don't suppose, I know. I kept forgeting to review you.