Reviews for Breaking Crayons
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Wow! Can really relate, awesome!
crystal goofy angel in green chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
omg i love it! you are like seriously awesome dude! if you stop writing... I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! MUHUHAHA! lol.. j/k.. but seriously.. don't ever stop writing dude.. you gots da talent!
addie pray chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
I'm reviewing, despite the review-begging, which strikes me as a bit immature...this is a shattering poem. Seriously. The last stanza is so touching. Very well done.
OneLitFirefly chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
On a scale of one to ten... 8.2 ! nice work!
StrawberryWater chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
Very good. It is very meaningful. I like it. Five stars.
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
Now this one was good. Childhood innocence, childhood bliss all just disappears...
-Cindy Moon *)
spinellin woods esquire chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
wow-you are so talented! please please please never stop writing-you got such a great gift-never lose it!
noelle chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
aww that was a sad poem.. i liked it.. haha.. it was great :)
Saeger chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
This is definitely something anybody could relate to...

Keep up the god work, Monkey Boy!
Seraphim of the Dark Moon chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Great work! I could picture this poem as I read it. Perfectly done and wonderful...WONDERFUL imagery. Keep writing! Blessings to you.
Kazuline chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
beautiful piece. i love what you're saying and how you expressed it. i was thinking maybe Broken Crayons would work as a title too...hm...that's just me. i'm adding this to my favorites, i love it