Reviews for Breaking Crayons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Can really relate, awesome! |
![]() ![]() omg i love it! you are like seriously awesome dude! if you stop writing... I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! MUHUHAHA! lol.. j/k.. but seriously.. don't ever stop writing dude.. you gots da talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm reviewing, despite the review-begging, which strikes me as a bit immature...this is a shattering poem. Seriously. The last stanza is so touching. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() On a scale of one to ten... 8.2 ! nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. It is very meaningful. I like it. Five stars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this one was good. Childhood innocence, childhood bliss all just disappears... -Cindy Moon *) |
![]() ![]() wow-you are so talented! please please please never stop writing-you got such a great gift-never lose it! |
![]() ![]() aww that was a sad poem.. i liked it.. haha.. it was great :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is definitely something anybody could relate to... Keep up the god work, Monkey Boy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! I could picture this poem as I read it. Perfectly done and wonderful...WONDERFUL imagery. Keep writing! Blessings to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful piece. i love what you're saying and how you expressed it. i was thinking maybe Broken Crayons would work as a title too...hm...that's just me. i'm adding this to my favorites, i love it |