olgite the squidgal chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Wow, this is quite an interesting story and concept! Frankly, the ending is making me think about a lot of things. Excellent work!
Wesley Hendrix chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
I like the ending and the hint on the rapture.
Justokre chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Very nice. I enjoyed and wish it would continue if possible, but that would require MUCH comtemplation to develop an original and convincing alien society.
Lil1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
Creepy...At first I didn't get it-took me hours to figure it out *again, forgive me for my stupidity* Now I get it! Tricky...very tricky...
amdespot chapter 1 . 6/7/2002
god, this is just, one of the best stories i've was so interesting and the creativeness and originality of the story are magnificent!and your description of Faith: all i can say is wow!
Bella Ragazza chapter 1 . 12/11/2001
oh jesus christ...that was insane! brilliant.
Lissa chapter 1 . 9/8/2000
wow. cool idea
Kchana chapter 1 . 5/26/2000
I liked it, it was really good
Dee chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I liked this very seems like an opening there more to come? I would like to know more about Jake Xavier...Deexxx
jai chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I liked this, are you going to write a bit more in the same setting?
netshark chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Interesting piece.
heather chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Very good. Intresting twist
Meowsie chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Interesting and very well written.