Jesus. Joaquin is fucking creepy, almost to a twilight level.

Really good

this is EVIL of you, really... oh well i guess i should either wait for the unlikely update or just complete the story in my own head for my satisfaction :]

Please update?

I've just spent the better part of the day reading the lot of this story and come to the end to find it hasn't been updated for...4 years! Damn... And here I've fallen in love with it...

If you're still able to remember it, please do update.

SWEET!

i love it hahaha

thatz hot ]

aw, how disappointing :( i wish you would continue... four years is a very long time

I just love this story you are the Best! Please update.

OMG! THIS FIC IS AWESOME! i can't even remember whether i've read it before T_T lol... i would LOVE to read more! Joaquin is awesome! horribly mysterious and brooding XD Alex is... cute, in a certain strange way, and the whole thing between Craig and Shane is like whoa! O_O XD lol. i do hope that u'll continue this! :D

Nice :-) I like the Shane/Craig dynamic. The plot so far is really well done, believable (well, once you get past the vampire part... but obviously thats not supposed to be realistic), and detailed.

The only problem: Sometimes the plot twists are a little predictable. I could see something was going to happen between Shane and Craig since chapter 8. It's good to have some foreshadowing, but in some parts you lay it on a little thick.

It's still a great story, though :-)

Please update :-)

Nice story!Please update soon D

i wish you would continue this story its amazing..

continue, please? this fic is awesome. i don't know how you managed to think it up, i most certainly don't have the imagination to create anything like this fic. so, please, please update? though you haven't done so in like two years, i'm hoping that maybe this review will make you see how absolutely amazing this fic is and update.

yeah, and about the characters...Craig is driving me crazy! wah, what with all his sulking and closing up! Shane, too! they're too clueless. and Joaquin...i kinda hate him. i dunno, this whole master/slave this he's doing is horrible. honestly, i can't stand him. Alex is okay, though, i like his sulky/complicated personality.

so please, please, please update!

-kon

Joaquin is creepy. Not scary or anything...okay, that makes no sense. But seriously...owning people? Creepy. And so NOT a turn-on. Oh, and, update soon. And please have more about Mikey?

WOW! Doing a little surfing on FP this evening, I came across this story because it was listed on somebodys fave list. The summary intrigued me and I just had the itch to click on it and I am so very happy that I did! I am facinated by this story and may I add that I do so adore your character, Joaquin! You're a terrific writer and I enjoyed reading all the chapters you have so far. Thank you so much for sharing and entertaining us readers! I have already listed this story as well as you in my faves too.

great story but do you think it's a good idea to have Alex become almost drunk when you would think the the vamper would be thedrunk one? anyways i loved it and they're such a cute cuple to so they better stay a cute cuple!