Reviews for Crimson Tears
GoldenTears chapter 24 . 12/27/2003
OMG, I haven't reviewed or updated in ages...no time, no ideas, no nothing. I'm so happy to find that this is still the best story in the world! lol Gee, you've changed your pen name quite a lot. I glad to find your style in writing (with your newer stories) have not chaged.
I'll be posting up a chapter in Written in the Stars tonight (finally!) People probably thought I was dead...lol Anyway, I just wanted to read one of the stories I love so much, and to let you know I'm still living. So don't forget me, I'm still writing...but my computer is limiting my saving...so that's a bummer, but I will keep going! ((Smiles)) I'll servive if everyone else can. lol
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K.L. Dreary chapter 25 . 9/8/2003
Martha says: I want Selene! Give him to me now!

Damn those gay, evil society finches.

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K.L. Dreary chapter 24 . 9/8/2003
Excellent!

Chapter: 10/10

Story: 9/10

The Good:

- Grammer and spelling top notch as usual

- Nicely detailed. I could picture the entire thing in my head.

- Charaters feeling were described realistically

- you use full words. There are no lame things like Skool, 4, 2, Rawk in this story and that by itself deserves attention these days.

The "bad" - a.k.a. Why I dropped 1 point off.

- the giant empty space after each chapter (I didn't take points off of the story because of this. It's just annoying).

- I think some of their conversations were repeated a little too much (constant mentioning of Tristan being Selenes' past love).

- The mall chapter could have been summed up in a paragraph. It was fun to read in all but tedious.

- I'm in a bad mood

Overall I thouroughly enjoyed this story. 9/10 is still high on the list of ratings given from me. Write on, dude!

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K.L. Dreary chapter 23 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 8/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 22 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 9/10

Martha says: That Silver is a man-whore just like his boyfriend Sweet Pea. Martha no longer wishes to own Silver. Now he wants Selene.

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K.L. Dreary chapter 21 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 9/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 20 . 9/8/2003
nice! 8/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 19 . 9/8/2003
HAhahahaha pregnant male.

Lovely! 9/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 18 . 9/8/2003
Hm... could it be?

Nice! 8/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 17 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 9/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 16 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 9/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 15 . 9/8/2003
yay! 9/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 14 . 9/8/2003
Nice! 8.5/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 13 . 9/8/2003
Lovely! 8/10

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K.L. Dreary chapter 12 . 9/8/2003
Sorry about the double thing on the last review.

GrEA chapter!

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