Reviews for Change
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
this one made me smile, at the end. it holds a valid point and expresses it using deceptively simple comparisons very effectively - i loved it. :) there was some awesome approximate rhyming - especially during the fate of the stick, as i recall. and the rhythm was constant throughout, made it much easier and more entertaining to read. favorite lines from this one were: "a stick in the mud/a rock in the road" (repetitive line-style worked wonderfully right there), "a flood will come and push him into a stream to join with a river and then/to the sea," and "a storm will throw him over a cliff, to be shattered to bits." a very good piece, probably my favorite of these three that you've just posted. hope you post again soon! kudos!
Kari-demon chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
i agree, Angel