Reviews for Tears
La Solange chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Good haiku.. very expressive of the way I've felt sometimes. Keep it up; I'd like to see more of your work. _

Kakyou Takashiro chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
the heart trembles.
saintchris chapter 1 . 9/1/2003

Words, the way to advance when improving haikus

Just a thought, not a criticism, after reading your bio.

I don't read many haikus, but the ones I enjoy most are those that use the language fully, rather than one- or two- syllable words.

Not to say I didn't enjoy yours.
BadGirlz4Life chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Ouch. Tragedies...
FaceOfNo1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
I don't usually like haikus but yours are really good
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Another great haiku! I love this one... and believe me, the mourning never ends, lol, it just gets replaced by other things to mourn for. Once your heart is broken, it's forever broken. Sorry I'm not helping much, lol. But it'll all be great when the right guy comes along.
thaiswirl chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
so sorrowful...really great haiku!
willowzbitch chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
thats so sad :( but a good haiku, very nice imagery...great way to express yourself. well done!