|Reviews for Traces of Doubt|
| pille-ip chapter 35 . 10/2/2014
| Vallucast chapter 35 . 9/19/2014
Congratz for finishing.. and thank you for your effort and hardwork to bring this to us free reader. Believe me, this piece is beautiful. Too bad that people too lazy to review. Such as myself. Hehe.
HHave a good day
| Vallucast chapter 32 . 9/18/2014
I love it when things got emotionally happy... well.. glad that lancer ups and shines again though im still a bit irked with troy after he said his pieces to lancer..
that asides... i love this story in general. Have a good day
| Vallucast chapter 9 . 9/17/2014
Lots of surprise here... the few earlier chapter a bit disconnected for me perhaps because of orschen-whats his name- and their research. Too much information about them but then they didnt appear at all. It is confusing.. perhaps simplify their importance regarding the research is enough. Just one short paragraph.
And although slower... the pace is picking up nicely after chapter 6 so i can enjoy them again. And perhaps Juri oggling them too much, you made it as if he wanted to bed each beauty he met since his arrival on jainah.. it just disconcerting...
like for example i usually dislike brawny man but he's okay cause he's kind and has witty humour and so on so forth. Or perhaps.. yes the man is beautiful but too girly for my taste.. well at least thats my opinion.. I mean no offense. Have a good day.
| coldfusion2323 chapter 35 . 1/8/2013
I dunno if anyone will come across this but it's definetly worth the read. A nice story with a whole bunch of loveable and lively characters. Wish there was more on this gang!
| Lunatrix chapter 35 . 6/8/2010
OMIGOSHES! LUNA HAS QUESTIONS!
1) What would happen if a T-clone and a 'normal' human had a baby?
20 Since clones are genetically identical, would them having 'relations' count as incest?
LOVEE the story too. Must be my third time reading it...
You should make a side story with Terry and Giancarlo. I can just sense something happening there. XD
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 35 . 2/21/2010
This is another great story. Actually, I'm kind of proud of myself for guessing correctly about Hal's "girlfriend". I guess it's because I figured from the start that he might end up with a guy. Anyway, I loved this story and Mount Robillard. Lancer and Scott are still my favorite, though.
| lotrdeana17 chapter 35 . 5/5/2009
Sweet! I really enjoyed reading this sequel. So many relationships! _
| True.Randomness chapter 35 . 1/2/2008
This sequel was fantastic. I loved the new characters, my favorite being Juri. And the plot was light and happy, with just enough sadness. Your stories are wonderful and this is just one of your great pieces of art. I also loved that in this story questions were answered left in the first and suggestions cleared up. Thank you for writing just a splendid story.
| Asitha chapter 35 . 9/11/2007
I can't believe I didn't review this story (and MR) when I read it! I absolutely loved both of the stories. The characters were interesting and had lots of depth, and the story lines were really good. I can't say much more than I loved everything about both of them! I read all the side stories (and I even added MR to my favorites) and yeah...lots and lots of love. _
| Escagirl chapter 35 . 8/25/2007
When Hal was fighting with his g/f, I was thinking "she's really a guy, she's really a guy!" and I was right! I didn't really expect to be right.
And I love this series. You should write more!
| Guest chapter 35 . 5/24/2006
great story! this, mount robillard, and the numerous one-shots were awesome! i absolutely loved the characters, and your story was really cool!
soo... any chance of a one-shot of Scott and Lancer meeting Lancer's parents? and a sequel to traces of doubt would be really awesome too...
| Goldensong chapter 35 . 11/9/2004
Yay! You never cease to surprise me! I was totally blown away by the whole Lin and Hal thing, it is just so cool! Once again, I love Lancer and Scott to death, and the whole drag queen thing. It would be really nice if you could write a long 1 shot about Queen Marie's and Queen Sophie's revival... Please? *makes puppy eyes* I'd love you forever, I swear...
| technodragon78 chapter 35 . 5/29/2004
Loved it loved it loved it. Your story was great. I look forward to reading more of your work.
| Louise chapter 35 . 1/13/2004
It took me a while to get through this and The Mt Roulibard (sorry, my spelling isn't too great) story but it was sure worth it in the end!
The m/m got a little getting used to, especially all the sex scenes but all the relationships and everything were really sweet and that made up for it. I especially liked the twist with Hal and Lin in the end. I had a sneaking suspicion that the mysterious red head might turn out to be a guy...
I love the plot and the way you created a whole new but completly realistic world.
I think that maybe a little more involvment with the Union might have given a bigger twist to the plot and made the story even more exciting.
But otherwise I loved the stories and hope maybe to see a sequal to Traces Of Doubt...
Best of luck!