Very touching. I like this poem quite a bit. A great insight on death, from a working animal's perspective. :)

this is a different side of the story you don't hear often. I like it. :) i liked all the interesting adjectives you used in your stanzas. nicely done.

keep writing.

selah~

Umm it was ok. Your personifaction wasn't exactly the most exciting thing and the poem did seem a bit heavy and dragging but overall ok.