Reviews for In the Desert as Time Wore On
MissieMaroo chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Very touching. I like this poem quite a bit. A great insight on death, from a working animal's perspective. :)
selah chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
this is a different side of the story you don't hear often. I like it. :) i liked all the interesting adjectives you used in your stanzas. nicely done.

keep writing.

careless whisper chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
Umm it was ok. Your personifaction wasn't exactly the most exciting thing and the poem did seem a bit heavy and dragging but overall ok.