Reviews for Just To See You Smile |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lovely story. |
![]() ![]() I think you made a mistake last chapter. You said that Brad went up AFTER they all heard the gun shot so there was no possible way that Brad could have been shot. But other than that, nice story. I'm enjoying so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't see that coming! This is a great story! I really loved it! |
![]() ![]() Aw... this is so good! even though it's chapter 4 but oh well its so awesome! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() OMG!its awesome! I love it so much! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel! well anyways good luck and nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... okay... where's the sequel? That ending demands a sequel! Hell, reviewers demand a sequel! That was a good story.. I'm glad to have read it.. now, I hope I'll be reading a sequel:) -Stephani |
![]() ![]() this woz a great story! my frend told me 2 read it because she loves it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey girl...woah its finally the ends...so loving it..can't believe that its the end already too...peace girlo... |
![]() ![]() *cheers loudly, deafening all the people around her* hooray! that was such a great story! i love it! i don't have anything else to say, so keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I just got done reading your whole story and I love it! It kept me interested throughout the whole story. Are you going to make a sequel? I really REALLY hope you are! And if you are planning on making a sequel could you please give an authors note somewhere saying that you are. Like in your profile or something. Just a thought. If you are even going to that is. And again I think you definitley should make a sequel. Well gotta go. Bye |
![]() ![]() ok, first i would like to say that i loved this story! it was awesome. except for one part- how was brad the one shot? it said that he was still downstairs untying people when they all heard a gun shot...anyways, other than that, great job! and keep writing other stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRITTANY! I know, i am the slowest person on the entire planet. (This is The Kassy.) But I caught up! And I love it! Oh Eric's out of prison. Interesting, interesting. I'm curious... Planning out a sequel? Well, whether you are or aren't this was awesome and I'm sorry it took me so long to read. I'm way excited to get started on your two WIPs... I better get crackin'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! your story seems great, but I have no time. I'll read the rest as soon as I can. |
![]() ![]() happy belated b-day! sorry i haven't read in so long... i feel bad :( ooh nasty bit of a twist there with the gun. hmm eric was let out? interesting. cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I really enjoyed it :) Keep writing! -Toast |