Reviews for Secrets of Diary
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
You wrote that half asleep? I'd hate to see what you can do fully concious then...cos this is amazing!

Spawny
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
oh, that is so cool, and soo tru, i have a diary, man would i kill anyone who read it. phoenix
teh tarik chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
That was cute!

Excellent rhyming scheme and it all flowed fairly well. Great work.
K.L. Dreary chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Lovely rythym scheme. 10/10

TrEEs On FiRe!
Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Innovative, to say the least! I like the message.
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Hey, Seras Nova,

This was a really good poem. The rhymes fit perfectly together and the flow is just right. I think you did phenomenally with this. I love the pen name, too. Thanks for the review!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Nice work. You described the diary so well.

Heart of the Sword
Sage Valkisco chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Not all diaries can be kept secret from everybody...but still it was a good poem...i liked the rhyming
never enough chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Hey Seras Nova,

You know i was once told that you are only as sick as the secrets you keep. I don't know if that is a true statement or not but i wonder...

I like the image you have created with your secret diary. Great word choice and imagery here. I hope that you have a diary that gives you such confidentiality (i don't even know if you need it) in case you may need it!

Keep writing you are good. Thanks for sharing your work. SG.