Reviews for Close Close Mon Petit
dreamdiver chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
This poem is so romantic. But it's not sappy which is wording seems to go well together. And it gives a strong feeling to the had good detail as well.
Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Aw, this is so romantic without being stupidly sappy
kobebeefcake chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Wow, that was just wonderful. Truly the careful art of seduction and the naught involved behind it. I feel the angst too.
Thrift Whore chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Beautiful poem. I love how all the words just fit so perfectly with eachother. :)
meep chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
it's mon petit cabbage, right?
subliminality chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Thats sad. I hope you really dont feel that bitter! It makes me so sad to see such sad people :(
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
This is chilling...and heartbreaking.
blind mice chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
i like it, very seductive

hmm, i must save this for later *adds to favorites list*
Bicadian chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
A very compelling account of a one-sided love affair.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Intresting, good detail.