Reviews for Welcome to my Mind
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
wow...you left me gasping. awesome diction and imagery, this is amazing. yeah, you are "aptly verbal" lol. great job on this. i love it. keep up the awesome work!
Pace chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
oh, lots of big words. i liked it very...invigorating and um...enjoyable. see i can use big words too! lol. yeah i changed my name, because i was completly obsessed w/ sporks, i still love them but i am not quet as obbsessed as before. thanks of reviewing my schtuff!
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Well you got your wish. You are lyrically complex. :)

I like this poem. It sort of uses alliteration, in a way.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
As far as I'm concerned, you do accomplish your goals.

Heart of the Sword
Akennea chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
Very nice, I attempted to utilize a few of those words in my class and my peers just gave me a look of incomprehension, maybe I should bide my time then repeat them _ When the rest of the class has gained the knowlegde required to comprehend
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
*grins* I love your alliteration. This is very slam-ish.
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
That was...wow...A little confusing, but that's okay because it sounded really awesome!

Oh, one quick thing...I'm not so sure what you thought of my "They Write Just to Write", but if you didn't like it, that's cool. I don't normally write like that. It really is one of my more bitter pieces. Thanks for reviewing anyways though!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame