Reviews for Missed my Chance
JazzeeT chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
i seriously had to laugh when i saw the title.. this happens wayy to much.. reality sucks but ya.. very detailed poem...i like that it tells a story tahts touching
ButterfliKysses chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I really like this, even though its very sad. I'm not sure why but I can relate to it someone (although I did not miss my chance with a girl or anything, because I am a girl, but thats obvious because no guy would have a name-thing like ButterfliKysses or rant on like this) Any-Who, Write more ASAP!
C Shot chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Ah, looks like someon emissed there chance.. hehehhe, well I like this very well written. Well Ive returned the review (ain't I such a nice guy?)

C Shot

(btw i read your bio and I am over the age of 14)
Seras Nova chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Such a sad song, but wonderfully writen. I hope you catch the next girl that falls for you.

Keep writing.

-Seras
Strawberry Chapstick chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Aw, that's really sweet. Life would be far too easy if we could see our mistakes before we made them. Well structured and well thought out song. Well done xx
Lashback chapter 1 . 9/3/2003
are you sure you wrote this? its like you stole the words right from my thoughts!It cool!
fontanellemonster chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
im not sure yet what i thought of the song, but dude i feel for you. im guessing this actually means a lot to you, which i like but...agh i still cant decide whether i despise it and want to stab it or whether i think its sweet. lets go happy. ill say its sweet.
Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
You sound like Scarlett from Gone with the Wind, man.

My sympathy...

Good job- sometimes the rhymes were slightly forced, but overall it was a good poem.

m* Sunflower, anyone?