Reviews for Alone
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
i have to say it had one of the best flows ive seen in a while. the rhymes... awesome... all in all i thought it was a great poem...
Pont chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Aw! Poor evil barbies. Too bad I don't like barbies and therefore find it extremely difficult to feel anything resembling pity for them! (translation: keep up the good work! (oh gosh, I'm so mean :hides head:)) now that I've finished reviewing your author's note, I go to review your poem!

I like the way you put in the little sarcastic-sounding () and {}. Very pretty, and doesn't make it choppy or typical up the good work~!

~ponteh
Cherry White chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
ive had nights such as that, keep writing, im off to review some others of yours.
Snow dragon chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
kewl poem, i like trhe lines in paranthises.
the dalai llama chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Dont stay home alone, my child. Come to my kingdom and we can sing...I DONT WANNA WORK I JUST WANNA BANG ON MY DRUM ALL DAY! Yes, my child. Thank you.
From...the dalai llama
squashedbanana chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
Why hello again. I just got a review on one of my poems saying that my penname is very inventive ! hmm...
i wonder if she was being sarcastic...?
I shall ponder...
emilly chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
my black shirt that im wearing is see threw good poem
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
Then I grew up and it tasted bitter

Bitter's better (send the letter!)

{She's been this way since I first met her}

that just seems to characterize your writing. but it's absolutely beautiful.
lady-of-the-wind chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
It is a bit confusing...but like it matters! I actually get it in a sort of way _ Once again you have turned out a beautiful peice of poetry! Well gotta go and read your other new one! Hurry up and update the Little Red riding hood story pwease? _
translucence chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the way you changed the rhyming pattern for each paragraph - it gave the poem depth, made it stand out. And I'm still swooning over your use of parenthesis...
inquistrix chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
ultimately brilliant...im speechless...your use of phrasing, words, perfectly blended...nice job!

check my stuf out if you've got the time

iNzaNiTi
Jordan Lyga chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
wow, it's freaky how close i can relate to this poem. when i went through my 3 year stage of depression it was like that. i never thought i'd see it in a poem though. its awesome.

review mine if you would please.

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thanks
stephalophagus chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
I like this a lot, it's got a very different and yet effective style. The rhyme found within it is good and aids the purpose of the poem rather than defeating it like so many other rhyming poems seem to do. Very good, I'm impressed.
Trinity Joselyn Carter chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
wow... that is good and psychotic
IHJ chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Interesting style. (One spelling error - the first "night" which is spelled "nignt") Like the third stanza with the one word lines. Interesting poem...
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