As I was reading this thing it really had nothing a poem would have. Perhaps maybe a couple of rhymes and some measure but not really much from that. More like a jumbled garble of words. Perhaps before posting massive amounts of poems at once look voer them too see if they are actually decent.

that was good but i just skimmed it. it was way too long and too many white spaces

Fabulous choice of quotes, and I might add that the poem(s)are well crafted, especially the first one.

Interesting..I like your style. However you might not want to subsitute you for u..it just makes the poem look a little better. I also don't understand the part "(with my slow worthless existence) these bits u put in brackets are cool" I like it quite a bit Kudos.

Please Read and Reveiw some of my work...~Cassendra

this is intresting, i like this as i can relate to loneliness, but i guess, so can everyone...

i love this part, its so true...

'the tall apartments and offices where the people waste away- as though the power emanating from every dark suit

is the life of the wearer slowly being drained away reducing the people to clones-powered by the'importance' of their jobs and the things which 'must' be done'

nice one... the intellect