Reviews for You Knew More
superficiality chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
Hey Dora! Guess Who!
Anyway i loved it! Such a great fic, totally got me sucked in when reading it! You knwo what i mean... Keep writing!
Ocaso chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
You rock. I love this fic. How can you come up with this stuff? It's excellent. As you may have noticed, I seem to like/love angst. This one is far better than anything I could've written. I'm in a complete state of awe...
shadowofadoubt72 chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
O.o That one gave me the shudders...

Hmm, well, I can definitly relate to this, except for the part about the dad dying on the couch and the mum cheating. But everything else makes sense to me. I hope you don't tr to cut yourself too deep. *hugz*
Crucified Sanctity chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
*fights the tears* Man, gimme a minute...

Ok back now. That is so sad '( I could feel it physically in my heart wrenching tears out of me '( God. I mean it just hurts so much but it hurts in an artistic, beautiful, good way. Oh dear. I'm talking rubbish again . I'll leave ya alone

- Crucified Sanctity -
My Little Poet chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
amazing. short but extremely powerful. :-) i love your use of words and the way you structure your stories. ur very talented!
ithinkillremainanonymous chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
Jackkarson, you make my arse crack itch. the world needs less people like you. and intiative, keep writing. your stories are really good.
losingthebattle chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
great elaboration
JackKarson chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Wow! What a ripoff, I bet you saw Secretary and took "that one time you cut yourself just a little too deep" from it and then built on it. And if this is based on your life, I feel sorry for you, not for what happened, but because you have no emotion in your work. The whatever you call this, seems to drag out, you dont know when to keep things short, nor do you know when to take what is good and lengthen it.
Ariel chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
That, amigo, was absolutely superb. Keep up the good work.
DreamerMe chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Whoa... At first I thought it was a little too angsty for me (sorry 'bout that), but DUDE! That was FANTASTIC! Every sentence makes you hang on to the next, and the ending, WHEW! There is a lot of wisdom in this piece of yours...

Continue writing! You're doing very well!
Seremela Minyatur chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
wow! this was a truly powerful and incredibly well written piece. the different emotions u wrote about r so real and tangible 4 some of us. i can relate to a lot of this. i kno just how it feels to want 2 scream and be heard, and cutting of course. the emotions r so strong, i wonder if this is reallt yur life. anyways, great job! keep writing!
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Wow.. this is incredible. All of it is just so... powerful. It's an amazing piece, it really is. Brimming with all different emotions and so packed full of thoughts, but without becoming too much.. it's perfect. Also very sad.. makes me wonder if it's entirely fiction. I especially liked the part about screaming so that God could hear over all the others who might be talking to Him at that moment... very well done. I'm impressed and deeply moved.
RNL chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Great one! Wow...

Seran Perry chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
woah... damned kid that was excellent. *applauds*

Rock on and may the Force be with you
Sapphire Tears chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
I honestly can't say what I think about this piece, because it's impossible to put my emotions into words. That's why I hate writing reviews... I can never express what I want for stories like these. This is absolutely indescribable. This is one of the only things I've ever read that's really expressed what it's like to be a cutter, and the emotions that come along with it. I loved this... thanks for writing it.
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