:P plz update soon

Sorry for the late review, comps being REALLY fugly recently but I DID love this chapter. T'was QUITE interesting and captivating and now I'm out of creativity to reivew S damn...Can't wait till summer then I can post BOTH chapters of Traces that I have written out. Okay back to your story. Loved it, loved it, loved it lol! This new guy eh, puts quite the kink in their plans eh, can't wait for the turn out! Take care, great job, and good luck!
Love,
.soul

I like Brett...lol..j/m. I'm in homeroom...and we just finished our typing contest...lol. I won! I won!... ::coughs:: yea!
I liked the update...it was a little SHORT...but o well...Atleast you posted something...
Anyway Brett seems like a
"bad" person...but i know you have somethings up your sleeve! MWHAHAHA!...
Ok way too much sugar...I'm gonna leave before i start singing in Portugese...
Love ya!
Chelsea
P.S.-Update soon!

well sounds interesting. update soon!

Aw Skye, such a cute name his is! And Jeremy...grr I'm going to punch him...can I? HUH? PLEASE! Fine *pouts* I liked the chapter, sorry about the late review, my computer again, you know how it goes. I'll be checking out your other chapter soon hopefully! Keep rocking. Take care, great job, and good luck! *Did you think that i was gonna give it up to you...(you know the rest)*
Love,
.soul

Wow! You updated! lol...I don't like Jeremy...dunno what Liz is doing with him anyway...if i were her...I'd have broken up with him the second he got controling...guys are pigs...and in the end...it doesnt even matter...it's just sex...yea..don't ask lol...
Love is said to be painful
& I've had my share of pain...
Update SOON! PWEEZ!
Chelsea-* xoxo

So far it's good. I'd like to see more of it.
A note: Using expressions like "Cya later" might feel modern, but they usually deduct points from one's credability as an author. I'd suggest to avoid them.

hey! nice story. i like! keep writing and update soon!
~Emelie~

awz cool how you can write from a girl's POV very well P read and review my story "protector" plz and UPDATE

~k8

OOH! I'M A LOYAL REVIEWER? ::bounces around:: NIFTY! this is quite interesting...lol yep..interesting..and did i ever tell y outhat i like the name Brett?...lol ill cya later i've got to get to class...Update soon!

Chelsea..The Plummer

woah girl... totally forgot about this story... *.*

it's cute though... *eyebrow raise* haha. keep it goin.

-MandaZ

-gasp- Pushy! Pushy! oh, I want to punch him now! -growls- okay okay I'm done now.

Good chappie! I love it. Good start to the story. The prologue didn't do the plot line justice but you're nailing it now. I like it!

I'm a loyal reviewer? When did THAT happen! lol. Okay I'll step up to the roll! hehehe. Good Luck with this story.

l8er~

Love always,

A-Light-From-Your-Darkness

-PunxRokrChix RULEZ-

*yes i'm hyper*

In the words of Mickey D's: I'm Lovin' it! lmao.

Great prologue. Interesting actually, I like it tho. It says a lot and kinda foreshadows the story a little. Since you told me about it I decided to read it and now, now I'm waiting for the update so HURRY! lol. Okay I'll shut up now...HURRY! :being quiet now. I'll leave you to finish the chapter...ciao!

Love always,

A-Light-From-Your-Darkness

*ooh candy!

hm skye... what are you getting at this time?

I'M YOUR FIRST REVIEWER! I'M YOUR FIRST REVIEWER!I'M YOUR FIRST REVIEWER! exciting! Diggin' the story! update soon! and i love the title! lol Cya at VHS!

-The Plumster!