Damn, Willum. Could you possibly make things any worse for our heroes? Actually, don't answer that...

I wonder if the Lady is in league with the clones; she doesn't seem to be, but a twist could be right around the corner. In any case, many more twists are sure to come. Excellent job, Willum.

Willum, you've done it again. You have a knack for making things come full circle. How will Bill react to the most powerful enemy he's ever faced? What could he be feeling right now, I wonder?

Alright! This chapter was even better than the one that preceded it (especially since it held more shock returns and another cliffhanger).

Me thinks the Bartholomew gang are going to causing a lot of trouble.

Another great chapter. I like how they finished each other's thoughts.

I love . . . absolutely love when reviewers ruin chapter plot twists with their reviews . . . thank you very much.

"“Miss me?” asked Christine."

*Paul picks his jaw up from the floor.

Love it! Pls do continue...thanks for updating! *smiles*

greenz

She's alive!

Poor Bill...still has to put up with people while trying to save their lives.

Great storytelling as usual, not much else to say. Onward please.

What the...? Are you hinting at the possible return of a certain...nah, couldn't be.

It's good to see that Roy is still powerful as hell, though.

*Bites deep and drinks greedily of yet another chapter of THE greatest story on fictionpress*

This is wonderful I am very intersted to see you continue this story.

God, it's hard not to seem too fanboyish about this series. So I'll drop all pretence of not being hugely happy about the start of this new series. Excellent, thrilling and captivating. And it looks like we could be encountering a new "big bad" (I'd prefer that to inferior Bartholemew clones) in the shape of that thing at the bottom of the lift shaft.

This is all the more fortuitous as I only gained access to fictionpress a week ago, after 3 months in the wilderness.

Keep at it man!

Yeah the next series.

Update soon.

All right, here we go!

I'm very excited about this new series beginning, Willum, but you probably already knew that. This new search for halflings, fighting clones, big explosions everywhere...all of it promises strange new plot twists, I'm sure of it. (Hail to the Striders!)

Bill's Excellent Adventure continues, and rightfully so.