Reviews for Let Me Show You Everything
Heather chapter 29 . 1/26/2008
Oh my gosh! I just spent like 2 full days reading this. I read it like 4 years ago (more than once) and it's just as great this time as it was the last time. Or perhaps even better, because I wasn't spending so much time hating Ryan. (You have no idea how much I wanted to strangle him back then, LOL. He was getting in the way.) This has got to be like my favoritestestestest fic EVER - er, well, TWO fics, seeing as there ARE two. I mean, seriously. It's so good. The second is definitely better than the first in some ways, but I still love the first, too. But anyhoo, I don't wanna rant. I have enjoyed reading them again SO much. Have a GREAT DAY
xjennnny chapter 29 . 5/5/2007
omg. i freakin love this story! lol i ctied wen i read this story and ur my everything. i thought she was gonna get married to RYAN.*pout* he was my favorite character. lol oh wells i lik josh but i dont LOVE him lik RYAN. lik i sed hes m favorite story. u should do a story about one of the couples after they got married. u should do one about ryan and natasha! ] get bak to me on that
siddika chapter 29 . 1/31/2007
NA P chapter 29 . 12/19/2006
Hahahaha! OMG! THat is the best story i have read so far...! And I've read a lot of them and this surely is one of my favorites! SHEMAY! Hahaha! omg! I am COMPLETELY and UTTERLY in AWE of your ability to make a story out of nothing! You make the characters REAL and I can say I really enjoyed it THAT much! Hahaha! And it's refreshing to read a wonderful story which has wonderful grammar too! Hahaha! Believe me I've read thousands of stories with so many grammar mistakes that it really really irked me! Hehehe! Well, that's me for you! Nyway! I hope you write more and hope to read more of your stories and I think you really really deserve more reviews cause, as cliche as it sounds...hehe :), your stories ROCK!
akaCHEEKS chapter 29 . 8/11/2006
you should do another story about their kids. you know being all close and everything.. hey can live somewhere.. probably still all living in new york.. and everything.. but this time the love happens between the kids.. get me? and their parents know exactly what's going on but they're just giving them advice and not like the whole ordeal because they want them to go through this by themselves.. get me?
Jaeiyola chapter 29 . 7/14/2006
Woot! Great job. There were some points that I just wanted to kill Jen. And then there were some parts that I want Jen and Ryan to be together. But I'm glad she chose Josh.
Gilly Bean2 chapter 29 . 5/5/2006, that's more like it! :) I'm such a softy recently. I think it is all the wedding planning I've been focusing on, which constantly reminds me of how much I love my fiance (and that makes me such a softy). Anyway, I loved the ending to this, so...good job, or something ;)
akaCHEEKS chapter 2 . 5/1/2006
aaw... i alread have a feeling that i know how this story will end up like... maan... sad... she's going to stay with him! why? omg! why? why oh why! argh! i still say i like her relationship with josh! i swear he was way better than this guy! i hope they get a divorce in the end! i swear i hope they do!
anon chapter 29 . 11/19/2005
Overall I liked this ending. I kinda wish that Josh could have played for the major leagues, but hey. :D
anon chapter 28 . 11/19/2005
AW... So. Happy. Honestly, for a while I was wondering how you could give this story a happy ending, but you did it. This really seemed like the best ending, taking both stories into account. I still like Ryan too. :D
anon chapter 27 . 11/19/2005 much angst! Maria is awesome! Go granny! I love her! :D
anon chapter 23 . 11/19/2005
Josh and Ryan are so sweet. :D
anon chapter 20 . 11/19/2005
AWW...poor Joshie!
anon chapter 19 . 11/19/2005
I just have to say, I LOVE THIS STORY! It is really great. Oh, and going off on a random tangent, I really hated what they did to Keiko. They moved the creature away from the home that he had gotten used to. He was a captive whale, and he had no idea how to survive in the wild. It wasn't right to just abandon him and think that he would just get used to it. I heard that he would swim up to fishing boats and beg for food. Okay...yeah... that was just some ranting. Anyway, GREAT STORY! Ryan is cute. :)
anon chapter 13 . 11/18/2005
This is a really great story! I am so glad that you decided to write a sequel. These characters deserved more story! :D
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