|Reviews for Fall is Here|
| Mime chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Yep, fall's here!
...only in southern Calif., all we get is sunshine...*looks up at the sky mournfully* Ah, will it ever rain?
*Wink* Great poem, really.
Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: . . Your help will be greatly appreciated!
| Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Beautiful. I love autumn, it's my favorite season.
My only criticism is the rhyme scheme - it seems a little forced in places, and sort of detracts from the otherwise lovely nature of the poem. But that could just be me, I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry.
Nice job. :)