O_O That was SO GOOD...o_o Beautiful emotions... :D *grabs a tissue* And it was sad... ;_; Oh yes. I updated my story, if you want to read! _

Anyway, GREAT JOB! *puts it on favorite stories list*

Wow, the emotions were really seperate here! But somehow you managed to enlace them together beautifully. I give it two-thumbs up! Nice work, really. Keep writing!

-Euro-

My only criticizm is that the rhyming is very forced. Otherwise, emotions were well expressed and the poem itself flowed like a river. Keep writing. I see much talent in these words

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o thats good. I find it amusings and sad at the sametime.

very nice job!

keep it up!

~ Little Dog Muse