|Reviews for Eight Second Angel|
| Tempergurl chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Are you going to keep going? I hope you do. I like it so far.
| Cowgurl4God chapter 3 . 12/4/2004
you seriosly need to add more ive already read the next chapter but lego already had a review on that one so i had to put my review on this chapter its a really good story
P.S. im a friend of Lego's
| Teperehmi chapter 4 . 11/29/2004
I liked it! Nice work so far.
| Cowgurl4God chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
I lovev it! So far I don't see any problems with it just that I want you to write even more on it.
| Roen chapter 2 . 9/4/2003
Not bad, although there isn't much yet to go on we'll be waiting for more.
| aqua-angel chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Hm... not bad. It could've used some descriptive paragraphs to introduce the scenery and get the readers to know the characters more. Dialogue is great, just needs more descriptions. More action in next chappie plz, i'll be back to check so update soon!