Reviews for Shattered Mind
Niphridell chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
grr...my train of thought was just bombed halfway through this by my dad asking me if I got my paper dolls finished (french assignment). *sigh* I'll prolly hafta go read this over again :P s'good though *_* I really like your style of writing :D keep up the good work! *_*

Niph
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Hey, this was really good. I was singing it like Linkin Park. You know, sorta rap metal...kinda... I loved it though. Excellent job!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
teh tarik chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
That was awesome! Such powerful words were used, and the rhyming was incredible. You're good at this stuff. Great job.