Reviews for Just a little dream gone wrong
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
Excellent poem. This was very well-written, excellent word choice and all the images were very powerful. Great work, keep writing :)

Niphridell chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
I never knew such innocent things could be so evil! j/k lol okay so I did *_* It's what comes from playing the game Sanitarium :P weird stuff right there.

dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Hey! Me likes this very muchos! THis was really cool. If this is what you dream about, then this is pretty tame compared to the stuff that manages to filter into my brain...Stil, in normal persons terms, that was pretty freaky. Loved it. Absolutely loved it!

~Cirien Phoenix