|Reviews for Reality|
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
hm, this one went weirdly through my head, i read it the first time, and it was kind of a blur, same thing with the next couple times, its odd though, cause i remember certian parts that would click in my head but then by the end, it would be like...o, what was that again..i dunno, i like it though, its interesting and really odd, something to brew over a bit, anywayz, excellent job
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Wow - I don't usually bother with the longer poems - they're not my thing but this was so good.
Maybe it was the idea of it as a song rather than a poem but... Man, it was good.
I can hear it being sung by somebody like A Perfect Circle , esp. the "If I wasn't dead I'd wanna die, wanna cry, want to lie" line - excellent stuff.