|Reviews for The Ongoing Battle|
| Brenron chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
I loved this!
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
an awesome poem...I actually have a few that sound a bit like this one. But I prefer to use some sort of symbolsim in my poems...so it sounds different than this, but is getting at the same thing.
Very awesome poem! Write on!