I rather like the idea of feathers in veins.

I've never thought of anything like that.

Also, I like the word 'tint.' Everybody seems to say 'taint' and I like 'tint' better.

Sincere and beautiful. I enjoyed the rythem and words in the peice, created a marvelous flow.

The ending is as lovely as the middle and the beginning,

-The Depths of Blue

Wow. This is amazing! Great job! _

i find it deep... it somewhat sounds
like Yami no Matsue..

I don't like punctuation either in poetry. Again, it's well written. You rock my socks!

I absolutely love it. Much loving.

this is beautiful. there are somany images in here, combined with an unlikely hint of sensuality. lovely

Very very well written and good word choices. Nice work.

-Seras

This was kinda jumpy, but otherwise good.

The absence of punctuation was fine. It, to me, made the poem. Some wonderful phrases are seen here! *claps*

-And thankyou for your comment! ;0)

Oh... wow... Very good!

You don't need punctuation. I completely understand not being able to write it in, I don't either. You don't need it. I think it would actually take away from the poem.