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Reviews for
Your Sweet, Suffiicient Smile
Faerie Corpse
chapter 1 .
8/10/2004
I really liked this one except for the last few sentences
Wesley Hendrix
chapter 1 .
10/30/2003
I like the rhyme scheme you used in this it really helps it flow.
Thanks for the review you gave me.