Reviews for Ceiling Serenade
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
there really isn't an accurate word to describe the feeling i got from this. it was a kind of curious suspension, like in movies when someone falls into water and they switch everything into slow motion and play eerie music. the shortness of the lines made it seem more simplistic, so that little things like "floating" and "wafting" seemed like embellishments 'twas very cool. i honestly can't decide on a favorite stanza, so let's just skip to favorite lines, shall we? :) "slowly singing," and "delicately dancing" were both equally intriguing to me in this poem. "slowly" and "delicately" were excellent word choices. you did a marvellous job with these last five pieces! keep up the incredible work!
GoodBye Everybody chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Woah, this was gay. Kudos.

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