Reviews for The Morning Lords Dance, The Evening Lords Cry
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Very good poem. It may have been short, but it was well-written, and you raised some good points. I also really liked the title. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
striking! the imagery in here was amazing - it managed to be beautiful without taking away from the horror of the subject; i was entirely fascinated by that. :P the title really struck my fancy, too very original and intriguing. i think my favorite lines from this one would have to be (besides the title), "golden light is shed by the dawning sun," "off to win, not to die" (the power in that line was uncanny), and "for the gain, made or not, was done on the trampled corpses of the dead" (i think i even got a little shiver from that last line). yet another grand success. awesome work, chica. :)