Reviews for Suicidal rhyme
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
not your best, but cool

OK stanas... try uploading it then going to edit.. then go to the end of a line hold shift & then hit enter. THen go to the beginning of the line & hit delete.. if that doesnt work lemme know
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
It was cool how you repeated the first thing at the very end. I really liked how it flowed and rhymed. Wonderful work!
AVIGON chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Not bad. Good rhythm. I'd consider paragraphing it though.
Dark Princess of Light chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
I like this one too. I can relate with it. Very nice.