haha I loved the ending- subtle break of the 4th wall and all

See, this is why Tristan would make a better boyfriend. He actually respects Sam's choices, listens to her, is willing to just be friends if she doesn't want to date him, and wouldn't ignore her when she said to stop.

Vincent, on the other hand, has violent tendencies and an unpredictable, explosive temper. He tries to distract Sam when she tells him to stop. He waves red abuse flags quite frequently.

There's still 8 chapters left. I'm hopeful that she won't end up dating Vincent.

Yeah, she's scared because you were waving red abuse flags at her, genius. Which actually is a very reasonable reason to be afraid, especially since she's already an abuse victim. Whadda ya know.

Yes, I was writing to one of your characters.

Tristan would definitely make a better boyfriend than Vince. I have declared my verdict.

It is official. I despise Frank Westlane even more than Mr. Collins. Ugh.

...Remind me why Sam likes Vince? He seems like he's probably an abusive jerk. Please tell me she ends up with Will or Tristan. Or, like, anyone who isn't abusive in any way.

Did you really revert to the overdone chaste good girl, bad girl villainized for being in control of her sexuality thing? Wouldn't it make more sense for Victoria's act if she wore something that looked great but wasn't red-with-slits? And does Dani really think that way? Women actually aren't born manipulators, as a general thing. I'm glad you had Sam question that. The positive female relationships are also great; that's something lacking in a lot of media, and it's something we need more of. So thank you for that.

Um, why was Carrie acting like her liking girls would be a bad thing? I'm guessing you don't want to say that lesbians are bad, so you might want to change how the narrative treats that. Just a small quibble from your friendly neighborhood anonymous critical thinker!

-Indigo

That last scene. Just. Hilarious.

can't believe i'm done reading this so soon. I seriously have no bounds on my joys for reading this marvelous, amazing, wonderful, real awesome story after a long time. And I really appreciate your efforts for re-posting this story even though it got plagiarized so many time (as you said so). Thanks so much for letting us read this wonderful story. :D Vincent was my favorite character all throughout and I enjoyed a lot about Will’s jokes and stuff. Sammy was one sweetie. Hell, my own nick name is Sam, really XD I really enjoyed this story, trust me :D I wanted to ask you something. Please reply on PM! :D
Till then, wonderful job and I wish you best of luck for all your wonderful works coming up. Cheers :D

AWESOME STORY! I really love this and I'm sure I'm gonna complete reading this ;)

yes please tristan he deserves to be happy omfg

beautiful havent cried in so long

Yey. Its the whole story, not just some of it with nearly all of it removed because I came to late. Hope its good, looking forward to reading it.

Adore this story! It was really cute and fun ! I remember ironically having read at the time a girl promoting a very similar story as if it were an Ouran high fic ... :c she was shameless