Reviews for False Facades
MeBeKiki chapter 30 . 4/20/2013

y am i in luv


LOL. I shipped Jack/Will so hard throughout this story. As for Samantha and Vince, I'm so glad for them! This story has been on the favorites list of so many writers on this site, now I know why! This story is amazing, I am SO glad you reposted it. Can William be a real person so I can find him and make him mine? xD Haha like I said before, this story is amazing. And so are you. (:
MeBeKiki chapter 14 . 4/20/2013
Will. Possibly the greatest character created in all of Fictionpress. Gosh, I love him so much. :D
MeBeKiki chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
"Maybe he liked you too -"
"I'm this close to slamming my fist into your face."
"I'm shutting up."

I'm in love already.
scriibble chapter 30 . 4/17/2013
hola! Thankyou so much for reposting this story! i didnt read it before it was plagerized but i have now and its amazing!

Carly xxx
boetprg182 chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
FINALLY SOMEONE KNOOOOOWS! I feel like a large weight has been lifted off of my shoulders.
Valia Exendra chapter 30 . 4/9/2013
Okay, here comes a long review. You don't have to read it because I know you have over 7000 of them, but I feel obligated to leave something because you have graced us with such a wonderful story.

I finished reading this whole thing in one night, but didn't write the review yet because I was waiting for a time were I could safely write a nice wrong review that you probably would never get around to or bother finish reading.

You are a pure genius with characters. They are all very consistent, and Sammy could easily have been this annoying Mary-Sue character, but you made her so likeable and endearing, I was rooting for her the whole way through. I love Sammy's awkwardness and cute blushing since it makes her so much more real. Insecurities (like gaining weight) that are so annoying to hear real people bitch about were made to be very fitting for Sammy to have. Also, not having shaved her legs in a while is something writers never write because they want a flawless character, but on Sammy it was, again, a very cute worry.
I have to say I enjoyed Frank's mental breakdown in this last chapter, because it is such a more fitting ending for him than being locked up in a jail cell waiting to get out. He deserves a permanent prison in his own mind for what her did.

I also have to say that I'm estatic with your little medical details. Things like how long it takes for a broken ribs to heal, or if Vincent got stabbed in the stomach, the acid would leak out and fry his insides. You make things very realistic, and not glorified like in too many books. I liked that you didn't shy away from giving Sammy two black eyes, even though that just looks really unattractive in real life.

You are very humourous in a thoroughly entertaining style. I'm just in love with Will's antics. He has to be one of my three favourite character characters from this story. My favourite quote is anything Will has said plus "That is so unbelievably sad in so many different ways." from Vincent about the dust bunnies.
Speaking of the dust bunnies, I absolutely loved that side-story. The Sammy drunk scene is definitely my favourite part of the whole story. "I hate cabbages." I actually laughed my head off at that line and almost woke up everyone in my house (it was around 1:30 AM at that point) And Terry flushing Fluffy down the toilet, I was both crying and laughing about that. I knew this drunk scene was going to happen the moment Sammy got Vincent as a roommate. AND I WAS RIGHT. Sorry. Momentary lapse of control.
I think I may also have died of laughter (and revived) when Terry kneed Frank in the nuts. Does this make me a sadistice person?

Another thing I'm really happy about is Mrs. Grenford. I'm glad that you showed she wasn't just this uncaring piece of ice. A lot of people write about horrible, horrible mothers, and I thought that these people just had no emotions, but after reading a certain Hunger Games fanfiction on Fan fiction . net, I understood that most mothers care so much about their children, because after all, the children are part of them. The mothers carried them for nine months, and went through an excruciating process of birthing the babies, and voila. I new bundle of life with half your DNA. This almost makes me want to be an obs/gyn, but then again... no. I'd rather be a surgeon or a even a family doctor.
And the plate and utensil smashing thing Vince and Dani did is so realistic. It's such a rich kid thing, I could just imagine my old class mates doing that. I used to go to private schools, and the parents were just as snobby as some of the parents you wrote about.

I'm also glad I read this thing after you finished because I see it took you about 5 years and 3 months to finish, and I would've died waiting that long. YOU HAVE SO MANY CLIFFHANGERS.
You should actually be a proffesional writer. Or maybe have another job and write on the side. But I feel like I read somewhere that you had already published a book... Or maybe I'm going mad. OH GODS I DON'T WANT TO END UP LIKE FRANK. Ahem. Anyways, I also believe I read somewhere this story is a rough draft you wrote when you were thirteen? That's just a year younger than me, and I don't believe I could have written anything this entertaining, or put so much commitment and effort into it. But I do know everyone cringes when looking back on what they've written in the past. But hey, that's called improvement.

I only have a couple small complaints? Issues? Just some small things I consider to be inconsistencies.
1. I feel like Tristan doesn't really interact/ know Sammy that much to actually develop feelings for her. And if he did develop feelings for her, then he gave her up way too easily. But we all knew it was going to be Vincent from the moment Sammy crashed into his bare chest.
2. The whole Tristan vs Grenford thing didn't really escalate to the point I expected. (But that's just me)
3. The pranks that I so longingly waited for never came. Except for Jack pointing Sammy in the wrong direction, I don't recall any other pranks.

I'm so happy Sammy got the happy end she deserved. She just deserves a long happy life with Vincent and Terry making a complete recovery. And she should never have to remember or see Frank again.

Another huge thank you for writing this. I had a plot bunny running around my head for three years, telling me to write something with a private school, rich kids, and a scholar-ship kid. I never really got around to it, but this story has really put me into the mood, and I think I might get something done now!

Lots of love,

P.S. Sorry about my horrible grammar and sentence structure. Possibly typos too. It's late and I can't speak (write) eloquently at this hour of darkness.
A Reviewer chapter 30 . 4/8/2013
So, this is my second time reading this story. It's really one of my favs, and no other story has really made me laugh so hard. In general, I feel like its hard to pull off this cliche without it sounding...fangirlish...for lack of a better description. This is one of the few stories that can pull it off, and the best one by far ) Or maybe this story just ruined all of the others for me lol...they do say nothing beats the original (seeing as this story is 10 years!)
Valia Exendra chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
I love it already! You definitely deserve such high reviews.
Dominique Diane chapter 30 . 4/3/2013
Oh, it's 4:49 am and just finished reading this awesome story! You have no idea how much I laughed with Will and Vince! It was so hilarious when no one knew about Sammy being a girl and how Vince thought he was gay! :) oh, God! It was a wonderful story, but what happened to Terry? Is he good now?
Annnabeee15 chapter 30 . 4/2/2013
This was by far one of the greatest stories I've read on FictionPress. Beautifully written and the characters weren't bad at all! I absolutely love Will and Sammy was adorable (though I'm not bi)! Thank you so much for this and I really hope you can finally get away from the people who plagiarize and continue on your wonderful writing skills!
ZZZZzzzz chapter 30 . 3/28/2013
What a wonderful story!
ZZZZzzzz chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
Oh I hope she ends up going for Vincent!
UltimateDestiny chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
Awesome. Just bloody well awesome!
xnowherefastx chapter 30 . 3/18/2013
ASKLABLAGSHGA IT'S JUST SO AMAZING! I thought this was just going to be some cliche story but I was WRONG! OMFG I can't get over it! I was reading this on my Kindle in class and I got to the part where Will was trying to stop Vincent from going into Sam's room and when he told him that he loved him I almost laughed (really loud) right in the silent class! And then I started crying when Frank kidnapped Sammy and my mom made me PUT IT DOWN! I seriously read this in a few hpurs and this is possibly the best story I've read on this website. I can see why it has the most reviews/favs!
LaBru chapter 30 . 3/16/2013
This story is absolutely awesome. It is humorous. It had me laughing out loud. Will is hilarious. I felt like it was like Ouran High School (anime) except for the horrible uncle part. Thank you for this story.
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