Reviews for False Facades
rinievermilion chapter 30 . 5/13/2015
Just finish this story in 2 and a half hours mind you! Thank you thank you thank you! I usually read fanfiction and when I was stalking other people's favorite list I stumbled into an original story in fictionpress! I didnt even know this exist until now! Of course, then I search for the most favorite story and im not disappointed! This is truly amazing I want to forget all of it, and then read it again omg. Thank you sooo much for this story. Im off to read your next one.
EclairDenise chapter 30 . 4/19/2015
Wow, this is perfection.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Good story
Lah-Lah chapter 30 . 3/31/2015
I'm SAD over Tristan and Sammy. Geez...didn't even notice my error. Lol.
Lah-Lah chapter 30 . 3/31/2015
Awesome story!

Reminded me of a cross-over between Ouran High School Host Club - meets Cinderella - meets a 90s teen romance movie. Lol.

I will say, I'm a little said Sammy didn't get with Tristan. However, I'm glad he has his own story. I'm going to start that now. :-)
MyeelaGreyys chapter 17 . 3/28/2015
Ooooooh I love how understanding and considerate Tristan is! I wonder what will happen next after this. Gosh! When will Vincent know?! Anyway, love this chappie :)

MyeelaGreyys chapter 10 . 3/27/2015
Okk, so it's 3am here from where I am.. And I should be working on with my model (architecture stuff) because the deadline will be later in the afternoon, OR I should be studying (if I really don't plan to sleep) because we have finals in math in a few hours (8am, to be exact).. But here I am reading this awesome story, and writing a review about this awesome story in the middle of the night because this is just so awesome! HAHA!

Anyway I'm writing a review because I just want to comment about Vincent's lame yet funny excuse. Hahahah can't stop laughing at that. I'm starting to like him already. And Will too. Actually, I'm starting to like all the characters! Lol. And I really like the story, btw. :)

That's all for now. Teehee
Guest chapter 21 . 3/26/2015
Hey, I read this story a really long time ago but felt guilty not leaving a review.
The story is amazing and the characters are so engaging and credible. You are an amazing writer. Continue to enlighten. Cheers!
Guest chapter 30 . 3/25/2015
This is the second time I've read this wonderful story in 2 years and it's still as good as it was when I first read it. My favorite story of all time, even if it's isnt necessarily an official book or anything.
KLV.Me chapter 28 . 3/17/2015
Oh my God! I'm in love with this... You made me cry! Big achievement, cause I usually don't. And as far as the whole story is concerned, again, I'm in love...
God bless.
Thank you for being wonderful enough to write down this piece of gold!
KLV.Me chapter 19 . 3/17/2015
Please Terry! Don't die! Please don't let the ugly uncle kill him!
SophieBeaLouise chapter 7 . 2/24/2015
You're an incredible writer! I love your work :)
Anonymous Demigods chapter 23 . 2/21/2015
The first time you read a story, it's to fall in love with it, the second time you read a story is to fangirl. This doesn't have to be an actual book to be considered a fandom after all you have more fans than you can imagine to create one.
Anonymous Demigod
emerald veil chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Love how the chapter started! The writing has character.
Good dialogue.
emerald veil chapter 30 . 2/20/2015
Liked your story! It really reminded me of the plot devices used in shoujo manga. You wouldn't have happened to read a lot of manga before you were eventually inspired to write this story, were you? It would seriously explain the plot devices.

I don't know what kind of criticism you're looking for because I don't know if you plan to one day publish fiction professionally (for a part time living), or if this is just a fun side hobby.
That and you've already mentioned that you're aware of the issues you need to fix (I'm talking plot, characterization, scenes, pacing, etc... not grammar. I have no intention of proofreading). I think it's pointless for me to point out the issues if the author is already aware of them.

I only give serious criticism if the author has published a final draft (stating that they've edited it to the best of their ability, and are looking for criticism because they want to grow as an author). Otherwise, I'd assume the story is the author's fun hobby of playing out an entertaining fantasy that they wish to share with the public. In this case, the author is most likely not looking for serious criticism. And who am I to spoil the fun?

Even though fictionpress and fanfiction have stated that all their authors are aspiring writers, I believe that a lot of them joined only because it was a convenient platform to share their stories (for fun).

Again, even though this was a rough draft, I was thoroughly entertained. I hope you carry on with your writing. Who knows. I might find a book one day published by you under a pen name. (Most author's said that they keep their day job. Unless you're super famous, writing doesn't generate enough income to sustain your living expenses. Also, A lot of authors nowadays have stated that they published on sites like these in their early days before deciding to make a career out of it.

You might be a future author! (I don't mean to put any pressure on you or anything). Enjoy writing! And we enjoy reading your work!
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