Reviews for False Facades |
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![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! The anticipation is killing me- who is going to find out about Same first? Keep the chappies coming please. Much love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() she was in trouble but somehow she managed to get out of it without anyone noticing.. well done! am looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh huh... what a nice escape... run for your life out the door as fast as your legs can carry you... nice... XD update soon! the chapter needs to be longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. 33 reviews already! . Lol, the situation seemed very odd for her and you seemed to describe it very well. Good job! D |
![]() ![]() Wow! i love it! that was thrilling, and very well written i must say. Sam was really cool, but i can connect with her too. Well, can't wait till the next chapter, keep on writin! ~cpe |
![]() ![]() Update! Update! Now!Now!Now! Forgive me if I seem demanding and bossy, but UPDATE NOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love these stories! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() I really like it! I think it's a great idea, great story, and the description is very good. Keep (smiling) updating! I can't wait to read the next chappy! |
![]() ![]() TRISTAN! Everyone's voting Vincent, but I think Tristan's character is just adorable! This is a great story! It has a very unique plot and good character introductions- the only thing I would suggest, or more request, would be more of a physical decription of the characters. I have the hair color down, but it's just a little hard to picture the characters with only that aspect. I can't wait for the next chapter and for the plot to actually start playing out. Amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really good! I hope you update soon! If you want my opinion on the "leading guy" I'd choose Vincent. |
![]() ![]() sweetness! i love what you have going! the only criticism i would have is to maybe have more character identification as i couldn't tell anybody apart from eachother :) but either way! amazing start and i can't wait until the 4th chappie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter! That was so close! As for the "leading guy" I think that Tristan reminds me of Tristan DuGrey off of Gilmore Girls...(maybe thats just me)...but Vincent sounds really cool...Right now my votes Vincent! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() Leading guy! VINCENT! Blech, who likes blondes anymore anyways! o0! YOU MUST GET OUT MORE SOON |
![]() ![]() This is great you have to write more sooN! ~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I luv it, plz write more soon! I just luv the story! *grins* i dunno either. in the first two chapters i was kinda for vincent but like now im for tristan. Tristan sounds so adorable *sighs* i dunno, but vincent is the roomate, interesting... good luck with making ur pic i'll just cheer for whoever u choose as the lead guy. Tristan now but who knows, maybe i'll like vincent even more the next chappie |