Reviews for False Facades |
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![]() ![]() I vote William! Mwahaha! _ Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor men! They all think they are turning gay or something! I really like Sam, and he problems are just hilarious! Okay, that was an excess of elclamation points-oh lord, can't even spell the word-but I really like this story. And I don't know who either, I started off the story thinking it was going to be Vincent, I guess I still think that way. But I LOVE Tristan! He's nice, and cool, and all those things inbetween. Either guy is great-but I guess I'm leaning more on the blusher...Anyways, UPDATE soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the leading man should be...drumroll please...VINCENT! i don't know y but i like him much better than tristian. but it is ure story,lol. good writing update soon. |
![]() ![]() WONDERFUL! though some sections almost get too detailed and you don't quite focus on the plot...I love it, its going on my favorite stories... I would very much enjoy it if you reviewed my story. Search me by penname-Sydney Mangkoff Thank you!Keep it up! ~Sydney |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniggers* I like it how she's already 'one of the guys'. Especially with William;) great story, am loving it:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, u updated! LoL great chappie hahah it was really funny, my cheeks hurt. William is sucha an interesting character... that was so funny with Vincent thinking to himself hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... this is very interesting and kinda well written compared to some of the other stuff I have read. I would like to read more so please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story seems to be very good. However, you put too much flushing and the same words like " he bit his lip" and all. try to use different actions... and Im sure not all girls would go red in the face because of the comments boy make. You should make her a more stronger character; in my opinion. Good idea of the bisexual but... would he really say it to a person he doesnt know? I think you should be a bit more realistic...! Great chapter though P |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! and i don't mean to be so perky but this is really funny and it sorta doubles as a slash by default :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sam, poor everyone, especially Vincent who thinks he is turning bisexual. And man, I feel for her. I would be totally freaking out if William was coming onto me too. Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ure story is really good. its funny too. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh! i love this! who's sam going to end up wiht? o, the suspense...lol, ok I'll stop. But update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Yor story is so good. Is Sam going to end up with vincent? Gee, I sure hope so. Anyawy, keep writing, and update soon. |
![]() ![]() this was a Great story! you're going to update soon right? This was a really good idea and I can't wait to see how this plays out! well, feel free to e-mail me anytime. Kaitlyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This is so GOOD! IT's very original too! And the writing is great! I am going to be watching for updates! |