Reviews for False Facades |
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![]() ![]() In the tenth paragraph the words treatment and of are stuck together just so you know it is a very wonderful story though. |
![]() ![]() Hahaha I love it! Especially the last lines! :v |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's a sequel! So so happy! _ Great ending by the way. I'm guessing your Will? O.o ? Haha ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sammy has truly made exceptional and trust worthy friends! So glad for her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes,yes, of course Will. Come in at the worst possible moment and get yourself killed. Why is he always appearing during times he should not be showing up ? I'm surprised he is not dead yet ! Even though he us just dumb,I love that guy he is my favorite character in the story! Such an adorable guy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best story ever. Ever. As in ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just started reading this story and it's really really good so far. First story I'm reading on fiction press. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first story I've ever read on this site and I finally finished and let me just say that this story was AMAZING! You have great talent and should never stop writing. I picture Vincent as Brant Dougherty and Tristan as Cody Allen Christian. Btw Will was my favorite character. I wish he was cause he would make a great friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore Will! Great story, I couldn't put it down:) |
![]() ![]() loved your story, And I loved the ending too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished the story and I decided to leave a comment. So overall I enjoyed the story. It kind of gave me a Hana Kimi vibe with a girl in an all boys school but obviously the circumstances are extremely different. I am glad it was a happy ending so to say but I feel like they should have been a lot angrier at Vince's mother. She never apologized for what she did and had a mindset where as long as her kids were not physically harmed, screw everyone else. I get that she helped with the media for the school and told the police not to question Sam while she was still weak but that is nearly not enough. She should feel remorse for turning her back. Oh well, I will look past it because the overall story was very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best stories I've read so far on the internet; great & unique characters, beautiful writing, story just detailed enough but not too much (the emotions are genuine and logical). It was a really great few hours of reading and I miss it already :) |
![]() ![]() This is the most favorite-ed story on all of fictionpress, and I can see why. Lovely work, hopefully you continue writing. You have talent.. Can't wait to start the sequel. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like really, dude. Do Ms. Word then write a fniggin' novel! No offense to you there all FictionPress writers, but this story's far over the rainbow over the limitations of FP. I like how strong the character of the characters are. They don't actually randomly mix up. Even without you mentioning who said it, you can actually imagine precisely who said it by his/her way to talk (unless you have a bad imagining power). Hey-ho and a bottle of rum for Maeven to crack! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god I feel like my heart just exploded. That was simply THE most BEAUTIFUL story I've ever read! Fabulous work, my dear. |