Reviews for My Treasures
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
this is *so* great! way to utilize the senses! i think you hit on every single one, except maybe taste and even there the ocean description could be described as salty. i truly experienced this one, it was wonderful! wow, okay, favorite lines (MAJORLY narrowed down for this one) were: "rubbing my hands in the fur of my black cat's belly," "skimming my face as i plunge into the ice of the sea," "the loam giving way beneath my sandaled feet," and "outside the mire of despair and monotony." excellent job with this! i love it!