Reviews for Time
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
awesome! this is beautiful and somewhat philosophical, which adds to the eternalness aura about it. liked the format with 'time' being the first word of each stanza, especially the break in the format in the fourth stanza ~ it added variety and made me rethink everything. :) the second stanza was my favorite of the five ~ there was this subtle delicacy about it that really intrigued me. my favorite lines were: "time/can't be held in a bottle," "swirling around itself in endless patterns," and "it can only be and weave its patterns." stunning work of poetry here, chica. kudos!

*p.s.~sorry for the slow review!*
AvaRicE chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
For some reason this reminds me of Celtic music. Namely Lorenna Mckinnet.


You've portrayed time in an interesting way... different and original. I like it.

Well written :D
eew chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
~ True! Great words and comparisons. It fully describes the subject.

c. butterfly~**