o. i like it. poor Axcelia. i mean, she sees the gorgeous man who she seemingly wants to be with... but surprise, surprise.. he may not be as nice as he seems. quite a cliff-hanger. continue soon. or i'll hunt you down and tie you to your computer chair.

Another fabulous update. I hope that you continue to write this story! _

hm, i like it. a lot. please continue. and what's the guy's name?

CLIFF...HANGER...CLIFF...HANGER! HOW DARE YOU OK I GONNA GO WRITE VAMP TEARS...WRITE MORE

Wow... I wonder if it's all a dream or something real... Either way, it's a good story. I like what you've done so far. _

so she lays down upon her bed and poof- in a whole new room in a castle. i like the crimson fabric on the bed... that's great. well, what can i say? i mean, he's a vampire, so he's entranced her. but the fact that she isn't even aware of him until she's completely under him- wow. and then- boom- she totally falls "into" him. I really like it

poor Axcelia- seeing the man, but it's only her seeing him. and his comment at the end- I will soon appear to you in person- geesh. poor girl.

so does she have visions then?

hm, don't be afraid? yeah right. well, what can you do?

Wow, I like what you've written so far. I am curious to know what will happen in the next chapter.

Great start! i want to see more, um.. it's a bit short through please make it longer so i can enjoy more of it. Ty

~ Pono-Kyunin