Reviews for Untitled
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Wonderful piece. Reminds me of imagist poetry at its best. I love that first line particularly. What an image, congruous in all its contradictions! You really should try and get published.
flowerthief chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Thats so cool, I just don't know what to say...I really like it!
AFictionOnceRemembered chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Absolutely loved it. Short and sweet. Keep up the great work.

PoorQueenAnne chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
This piece of poetry is incredably deep and makes you think... I like that.
Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
hmm do I smell a lovesick puppy? Wait no maybe it because I am sitting here reviewing you instead of taking a shower like i am meant to do!*sees occasional flowers dieing and people trying to spill perfume on me*lol

Nice work really beautiful and powerful feelings portrayed(lol another pretty word!) here.

pretty pink:)
Pont chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Lol. you must be really creeped out.

hee hee, very good. short, but very good. keep up the good work!

ill have to r&r more tomorrow.

Black Tangled Heart chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
You’re aiming to dazzle me dumb, aren’t you?

You succeeded.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
wonderful piece. well written, i love the imagery and words you use. this really flows, and is sad, but so beautifully put together. awesome job! keep on writing!
Ishuzu chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Still remember me? I can never keep up with your updates... This poem was short if not visually awesome
Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
oh. I like it. I like it a lot. A nightmare's emptied goblet. hmz, I like this one a lot. Not as good as the other one I just reviewed (Insert Title Here?) but great still. C'est fantasique!

PS I love Evanescence. Fave songs on their album are My Immortal and Hello
soulspring chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
flows very well... i love the first 2 lines.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
So great and moving as always.

~Heart of the Sword