Reviews for lily
floorcollision chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
you are so... ... ... raw. that's the word- raw.
i love it. A
JazzPizza chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Very depressing, but with a fulfilling sort of ending, in a wistful way...well done. The imagery in this is very vivid, and again there's a good use of form in this poem.

Keep up the good work.