|Reviews for Kept Secret|
| wildtenderness chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
| Melancholy Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
A really well written piece of writing! The imagery comes across clearly, and are all related to the theme and mood. I particularly liked the last line. Well done!
| genetic drifter chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
nice metaphor q_p
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
nice poem! an interesting point of view, too, which can be true in a lot of ways &) good job at expressing it.
'burdening your heart.'
| Lost-in-Insanity chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
interesting, good *nods*
| TygirSky chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
*sadness* that poems sad. Nice metaphors though _ i like it
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
wow, esp like the last line to this one, very interesting and different, muchly enjoyed this, profound, awesome job
| Keeper of the Key chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Wow, I love this poem! Great job with the wording. :)
| Falling Stars chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
This is really good, I like it
| Free-Writer chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
wonderfully portrayed! keep writing haikus, you're good at them.
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
The first two line reminds me of Pandora and her box but later on I understood.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Heart of the Sword
| swirlygirl chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
nice simply beautiful!
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
very awesome haiku...but when it posted it, the spaces between the 3 haiku was kinda lost. just wanted to point that out. but, I realized the mistake and read it as the three haiku. good writes! write on!