Reviews for Kept Secret |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow,that's beautiful.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really well written piece of writing! The imagery comes across clearly, and are all related to the theme and mood. I particularly liked the last line. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice metaphor q_p |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice poem! an interesting point of view, too, which can be true in a lot of ways &) good job at expressing it. 'burdening your heart.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, good *nods* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sadness* that poems sad. Nice metaphors though _~ i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, esp like the last line to this one, very interesting and different, muchly enjoyed this, profound, awesome job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love this poem! Great job with the wording. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderfully portrayed! keep writing haikus, you're good at them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first two line reminds me of Pandora and her box but later on I understood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. ~Heart of the Sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice simply beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very awesome haiku...but when it posted it, the spaces between the 3 haiku was kinda lost. just wanted to point that out. but, I realized the mistake and read it as the three haiku. good writes! write on! |