wow,that's beautiful..

A really well written piece of writing! The imagery comes across clearly, and are all related to the theme and mood. I particularly liked the last line. Well done!

nice metaphor q_p

nice poem! an interesting point of view, too, which can be true in a lot of ways &) good job at expressing it.

'burdening your heart.'

interesting, good *nods*

*sadness* that poems sad. Nice metaphors though _ i like it

wow, esp like the last line to this one, very interesting and different, muchly enjoyed this, profound, awesome job

Wow, I love this poem! Great job with the wording. :)

This is really good, I like it

wonderfully portrayed! keep writing haikus, you're good at them.

The first two line reminds me of Pandora and her box but later on I understood.

Awesome.

Heart of the Sword

nice simply beautiful!

very awesome haiku...but when it posted it, the spaces between the 3 haiku was kinda lost. just wanted to point that out. but, I realized the mistake and read it as the three haiku. good writes! write on!