Reviews for Indoctrination
the cute lil dead girl chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
man.. u've got very strong opinions about stuff..
jab chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
love it

fucking amazing

keep writing

it's compelling
Inoperative chapter 1 . 9/7/2003

a pet peeve: "Your most Christian philosophy is do unto others before the do unto you" is that meant to be before they do unto you?

love ya, love your poem, another one for the favs