Reviews for Flight!
katyruth chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
interesting...i definitely like what it's about, and there is some nice imagery. however, i think you could ommit the work "soar" at the end, i think that just the "blue lines" line would be a better close to the poem. if you get a chance come review me! keep writing!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Beautiful work. I loved the metaphor.

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