Reviews for The Black Bird's Hunt
Katiefoolery chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
The first line of this poem drew me in. I enjoyed the way the couplets gave a series of images. The words you chose seemed to sum up the story nicely.
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Be careful of spelling errors. They can sometimes distract readers from the true purpose of your writing.
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Otherwise, keep writing. I think the best skill any writer can possess is the desire to keep going, to improve and to surpass your own goals. Your promise is most clearly revealed in the line that starts "A swift movement". Keep writing and enjoy yourself.